Im gonna live another day
today just let me die
Just let me touch the purple ray!!!
Or I'm afraid its gonna fly high
You are flowing through me like my own satin blood
Your face sparkled ,your smile shone
Im gonna hurt your soul along with me
Coz right now you are the only one I own.....
I have been here before,when or why I do not know
I know the footprints beyond the door
It comes in a blur all in a row
I cringe everytime you leave the shore.
I have been up all night
Just let me rest for a while,
The sunrays are searing up my soul
The stars reflect my tragic smile.
The flawless sinner has dulled my pace
Alas!!for eternity Im stuck in this haze...
MAgnificent poetry...
ReplyDeleteAll the word falls in the right place..
Words mean more than what is set down on paper. It takes the human voice to infuse them with deeper meaning.
loved dat...:)
ReplyDeletebeautifully portrayed...well done ratika..!!
ReplyDeletethnks swati,chitti and anu
ReplyDeleteI read many times over and over, and each time I saw I had omitted the grasp of words.
ReplyDeleteReally amazing trait. Stunned.
pretty nicely written.. equally impacting poetry..
ReplyDeleteI loved it..beautifully penned
ReplyDeleteI especially resonate with "I've been here before.....I know the footprints beyond the door."
ReplyDeleteAh yes, sometimes it does seem as if a person had been in that same place before!! I GET that.
ReplyDeleteThis reads like a psalm or incantation, scriptural in a way.
ReplyDeleteLovely sense of imagery in this piece---really beautifully done!
ReplyDeleteLove it!!!!
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