Saturday, April 21, 2012

Black rose


the original idea was lost somewhere between the heaven and the earth.....the wildness was being replaced by the sophisticated behaviour over time.....it was time for the black moon to dance in the grey sunlight...coz he knows no shadows will testify against his condescending love for the tragic procession of the purple stars...the rants were transitioning into requiems of the past....glares from the broken shards of glass were hurting his eyes......but squinting was not an option as almighty didnt  bless him with the power of vision....fragrance of sand was messing up with the procession .....he lashed at the nearest rose bush the only visible proof of life in the overwhelmingly vast stretch of land .....the veil of the thorns started bleeding .....was it his illusion or the thorns always bled like that..his fingernails were digging deep next to the bush....his life was buried beneath the piles of sand.......it has been ages will she be alive after all these years....the earthy smile was waiting for him....


adversity tears from us what we think is inseparable from us...noise was escalating behind her somewhere to unbearable decibels....."stop!!!" she shouted in her head....but the rose bush kept drilling her soul....and it was like she had been living here forever with her head buried in sand and everytime she screamed her lungs filled with golden sand.....


to be continued....

9 comments:

  1. Wow ... this completely transported me to a different world !!!

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  2. Well done , It has More poetic feel n glimpses in it , nice attempt.
    Try writing poems also ..you will do wonders in that sphere.

    keep writing .


    P.S : coming to blog sphere after 1 yr approx gap and to start the reading with yours post was nice.

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    1. thank you so much,honest feedbacks are always craved by the bloggers.. :)

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  3. ..powerful display of words..sheer sorcery..
    ..i loved the magic that you created in this wonderful post..
    ..its my first visit to your blog..will keep on returning..
    ..keep writing wonderfully.. :)

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  4. Nice.. Might hv been better I guess.. Bt you shud write more of flash fiction..

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    1. hmm since this is my first attempt,ill try improving..

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  5. I loved your Template..Bright and Vibrant...Just a sporting suggestion If I may say so...The Font size for the blog content seemed a little bigger than required. The reader would need to scroll too often while reading through the post which at times might not help much...Just a humble suggestion :)

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    1. im an illiterate when it comes to settings,but ill try implementing ur suggestion.

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