The sun-kissed sand witnessed the knights' never ending search. The thorns scarred his hands, the sun blazed his parched soul. Winds would whisper at night to stop his madness. He couldnt stop digging feverishly, not now , not today , when he could smell her smile beneath the sand. Today the mad knight would find his love he lost years ago in sandstorm, buried beneath the golden sand.
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Wow ... chilling :-) Surely a WOW post :-)
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Delete..wow..beautiful lines doc..sublime and ethereal..looking for more from you..keep writing.. :)
ReplyDeletethank u sir jee..for the encouragement.
Delete..hahaha..my badminton partner.. :)
DeleteThis was so creepy, so hauntingly chilling....Probably the best I have read of you....
ReplyDeletePS- Just correct 'sun kissed sand' to 'sun-kissed sand'
thanks I did correct the mentioned error.
DeleteHaunting, the thought! Nicely written.
ReplyDeleteand im short of words as to how much your comment means to me.
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ReplyDeleteReally touching... Love lost in the desert... Congrats for WOW :)
ReplyDeleteThanks!!
DeleteGolden!!
ReplyDeleteMerci, mercy !!
DeleteMujhe thoda der se samajh aaya wo laash dhund raha tha
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