Love is all in fire, yet is freezing,
Love is much in winning, but is more
in losing.
-Anonymous.
Love has been an inspiration for
literary masterpieces for ages, the most
talked about subject for ages. It is absolutely overwhelming sometimes to
witness real and unconditional love in modern India, but then life is full of
miracles.
Medical college brought a 180 degree
change in my otherwise mundane life. I consider myself very lucky for
experiencing most salubrious forms of love and every possible shade of this spiritual feeling( and this has nothing to do
with a certain ‘shade of grey’) But
there are always some stories which remain alive in our subconscious mind only
to spring back when matters of hearts are discussed. It’s a cliché that love
and friendship have always been interchanged and add to it the pressure of
medical studies, insane amount of course, pressure of ungodly working and study
hours and BAMMM! You have a completely messed up, tangled love story. It would
have been predictable had it been a triangle but here is the twist of spicy
fate , it involved four friends in a pretty complicated situation.
Meet Rajat and Rakshita, 1st year
medical students who became best friends during ragging perios when none of the
boys were allowed to interact with girls. They owed their friendship to the annual function and their
common interest in music. Whole batch was a bit jealous and a bit skeptical
about their growing friendship including Akshay and Garvita who had a huge crush on Rakshita and Rajat respectively from day 1.
The fate doesn’t ever leave anyone
alone and again it clawed its way in their story because of the fact that Rajat and Akshay were close friends while on
the other side Garvita was best friends with Rakshita.
Girls being a bit of sentimentalist will always be fool
when it comes to the matters of hearts. So Rakshita like a true friend and a good
samaritan stepped out of Rajat’s life and Garvita’s path going to the extent of
fighting with Rajat just to repel him . Now Garvita started dating Rajat and
Rakshita went out with Akshay just to get a hang of the dating game, not that
she was interested in any one. Things went smooth for about 2-3 years when Rakshita could not keep the pretense and broke up with Akshay. But she valued friendship a
tad more than love so she never interfered in her friends’ love life going
about her way.
Now, I always say facts
are stranger than fiction and hence both Rajat and Rakshita were unaware of the
fact that they both were in love with each other and by the time they realized
it, it was too late. But the fate once again tried bringing them together when
they met each other after a gap of 2 years after college, this time Rajat was sure that he has lost his true
love when he saw her after a gap. The
end is supposed to be a surprise as there will be nothing of interest if I
disclose so as to what happened in the end.
But the things that made
the story interesting was the involvement of a a lot of spiced-up characters,
the background of a medical college and not to forget the involvement of Akshay,
a guy who was an epitome of love but lost out quite early due to his ill-fate.
If you liked what you read, please do vote for it out here
If you liked what you read, please do vote for it out here
This is my entry for Harper collins-Indiblogger get published contest which is run with inputs from Yashodhara Lal and Harper Collins India
All the best ... but didn't you give a voting link?
ReplyDeleteeeesssshhhhh, my bad.....
ReplyDeletehttp://www.indiblogger.in/getpublished/idea/393/
Glad to read this again with the names doc. Wish you a very happy new year :)
ReplyDeletethank you so much DS...:)
ReplyDeleteOye, you haven't put your voting link there at the end. How will people vote for you? You will miss out. Do insert as soon as possible.
ReplyDeleteSecondly, i liked the whole idea and it looks like you can write a whole novel out of it. It would be challenging to limit it to a short story. Well done.
Thirdly and most importantly, you made a slight error which fortunately I have spotted (so u can change it before the judges spot it). Look at this line of yours, "Akshay and Garvita who had a huge crush on Rajat and Rakshita respectively from day 1".
It should be 'Rakshita and Rajat respectively' na??
Cool ... I voted :-)
ReplyDeleteritesh u saved my life....:)
ReplyDeletethanks...:)
Intriguing, Ratika!
ReplyDeletethank you suresh sir,
ReplyDeletelong time no see...
I voted in your entry long back...
ReplyDeleteI'm sure you'll make it quite interesting... best of luck!
:-)
thank anunoy...:)
ReplyDeletethis is quite a complicated story!! would love to read the rest. all the best for the contest!
ReplyDeleteclicked on the link to see if voting is closed. it's not, voted for your entry!
thanks debajyoti,
ReplyDeleteI hope you are not backscratching...:)
Great story!! I loved it. Eager to hear more about them
ReplyDeleteback scratching is part and parcel of blogging and a blog network survives because of that. however, i visit many blogs during my free times just for fun. at times i just enjoy the post and leave without posting a comment and at times i do post a comment. most of those bloggers know i am not looking for a return favor. my future visit to any blog depends on how a blogger treats his/her visitors (those who spent time to read a post) and not on a return visit.
ReplyDeleteonce again, all the best for the contest. hopefully, we will get to read the entire story in print :)
Hi Ratika,
ReplyDeleteHmmm, a love story in a medical college, sounds interesting.
The mention of ragging and studies brought back memories of my college days as well.
This looks like a cracker of a story idea. I hope that you get published :)
My vote goes to you, wish you luck :):):)
P.S. Do check out & vote for my entry for Get Published.
Regards
Jay
My Entry to Indiblogger Get Published
debajyoti,
ReplyDeletei had no intention of offending any one, its just that even i dont like being a part of backscratching game, but when publishing houses put up rules like these, we are left with little choices.
do visit again, if you like what you read.
thanks viva and jay..
read your story jay and voted.