Monday, December 31, 2012

Medical romance- My entry for the get published contest


Love is all in fire, yet is freezing,
Love is much in winning, but is more in losing.
                                                                                           -Anonymous.

Love has been an inspiration for literary masterpieces for ages,  the most talked about subject for ages. It is absolutely overwhelming sometimes to witness real and unconditional love in modern India, but then life is full of miracles.
Medical college brought a 180 degree change in my otherwise mundane life. I consider myself very lucky for experiencing most salubrious forms of love and every  possible shade of this  spiritual feeling( and this has nothing to do with a certain  ‘shade of grey’) But there are always some stories which remain alive in our subconscious mind only to spring back when matters of hearts are discussed. It’s a cliché that love and friendship have always been interchanged and add to it the pressure of medical studies, insane amount of course, pressure of ungodly working and study hours and BAMMM! You have a completely messed up, tangled love story. It would have been predictable had it been a triangle but here is the twist of spicy fate , it involved four friends in a pretty complicated situation.
Meet Rajat and Rakshita, 1st year medical students who became best friends during ragging perios when none of the boys were allowed to interact with girls. They owed their  friendship to the annual function and their common interest in music. Whole batch was a bit jealous and a bit skeptical about their growing friendship including Akshay and Garvita  who had a huge crush on Rakshita  and Rajat respectively from day 1.
The fate doesn’t ever leave anyone alone and again it clawed its way in their story because of the fact that  Rajat and Akshay were close friends while on the other side Garvita was best friends with Rakshita.
 Girls being a bit of sentimentalist will always be fool when it comes to the matters of hearts. So Rakshita like a true friend and a good samaritan stepped out of Rajat’s life and Garvita’s path going to the extent of fighting with Rajat just to repel him . Now Garvita started dating Rajat and Rakshita went out with Akshay just to get a hang of the dating game, not that she was interested in any one. Things went smooth for about 2-3 years when Rakshita could not keep the pretense and broke up with Akshay. But she valued friendship a tad more than love so she never interfered in her friends’ love life going about her way.
Now, I always say facts are stranger than fiction and hence both Rajat and Rakshita were unaware of the fact that they both were in love with each other and by the time they realized it, it was too late. But the fate once again tried bringing them together when they met each other after a gap of 2 years after college, this  time Rajat was sure that he has lost his true love  when he saw her after a gap. The end is supposed to be a surprise as there will be nothing of interest if I disclose so as to what happened in the end.
But the things that made the story interesting was the involvement of a a lot of spiced-up characters, the background of a medical college and not to forget the involvement of Akshay, a guy who was an epitome of love but lost out quite early due to his ill-fate.

If you liked what you read, please do vote for it out here

This is my entry for Harper collins-Indiblogger get published contest which is run with inputs from Yashodhara Lal and Harper Collins India

17 comments:

  1. All the best ... but didn't you give a voting link?

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  2. eeesssshhhhh, my bad.....

    http://www.indiblogger.in/getpublished/idea/393/

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  3. Glad to read this again with the names doc. Wish you a very happy new year :)

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  4. Oye, you haven't put your voting link there at the end. How will people vote for you? You will miss out. Do insert as soon as possible.

    Secondly, i liked the whole idea and it looks like you can write a whole novel out of it. It would be challenging to limit it to a short story. Well done.

    Thirdly and most importantly, you made a slight error which fortunately I have spotted (so u can change it before the judges spot it). Look at this line of yours, "Akshay and Garvita who had a huge crush on Rajat and Rakshita respectively from day 1".
    It should be 'Rakshita and Rajat respectively' na??

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  5. ritesh u saved my life....:)
    thanks...:)

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  6. thank you suresh sir,
    long time no see...

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  7. I voted in your entry long back...
    I'm sure you'll make it quite interesting... best of luck!
    :-)

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  8. this is quite a complicated story!! would love to read the rest. all the best for the contest!

    clicked on the link to see if voting is closed. it's not, voted for your entry!

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  9. thanks debajyoti,
    I hope you are not backscratching...:)

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  10. Great story!! I loved it. Eager to hear more about them

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  11. back scratching is part and parcel of blogging and a blog network survives because of that. however, i visit many blogs during my free times just for fun. at times i just enjoy the post and leave without posting a comment and at times i do post a comment. most of those bloggers know i am not looking for a return favor. my future visit to any blog depends on how a blogger treats his/her visitors (those who spent time to read a post) and not on a return visit.

    once again, all the best for the contest. hopefully, we will get to read the entire story in print :)

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  12. Hi Ratika,

    Hmmm, a love story in a medical college, sounds interesting.
    The mention of ragging and studies brought back memories of my college days as well.
    This looks like a cracker of a story idea. I hope that you get published :)

    My vote goes to you, wish you luck :):):)

    P.S. Do check out & vote for my entry for Get Published.

    Regards

    Jay
    My Entry to Indiblogger Get Published

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  13. debajyoti,
    i had no intention of offending any one, its just that even i dont like being a part of backscratching game, but when publishing houses put up rules like these, we are left with little choices.
    do visit again, if you like what you read.

    thanks viva and jay..
    read your story jay and voted.

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