Wednesday, September 4, 2013

Ballet

                      Two little feet on wood
               Carving her destiny on rythm
                     Bedazzles gaping me.





                             She moved with aplomb
                           Melting slowly in his arms
                        The floor burned underneath.



The haiku is for Haiku Heights and the prompt is ballet.
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12 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 4, 2013 at 1:36 PM

    Excellent haiku!

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  2. HoteiSeptember 5, 2013 at 1:43 AM

    Beautiful! enchanting! :)

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  3. Ramesh SoodSeptember 5, 2013 at 2:12 AM

    Good one... The floor burnt.. wow..a nice image in my mind...

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/09/anchored-haiku.html

    RS

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  4. NankaSeptember 5, 2013 at 2:19 AM

    Well said and the second one is excellent!!

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  5. C SureshSeptember 5, 2013 at 4:17 AM

    A woman of many talents, you are!

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  6. AnonymousSeptember 5, 2013 at 7:45 AM

    Exquisite!

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  7. JazzbumpaSeptember 5, 2013 at 9:20 AM

    you have captured
    the alpha and the omega
    of many girls' dreams

    Cheers!
    JzB

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  8. UnknownSeptember 5, 2013 at 11:16 AM

    Loved the second one...very sensuous :)

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  9. AnonymousSeptember 5, 2013 at 11:23 AM

    Enjoyed the romance of the second one especially.

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  10. Diwakar NarayanSeptember 5, 2013 at 4:16 PM

    The floor burned underneath - Excellent!

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  11. AnonymousSeptember 6, 2013 at 4:19 AM

    These are exceptional!

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  12. Amrit SinhaSeptember 7, 2013 at 12:23 PM

    I wonder in amazement as to how you have grown up with haiku ... this is brilliant ... truly you are a haiku expert now :-)

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