Saturday, February 16, 2013

Black

                                                           





                                                          Rainbow dreams,
                                                           Burned to ashes,
                                                           Black and white.


This haiku is shared with NaHaiWriMo and the theme today is black
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9 comments:

  1. AmitAagFebruary 16, 2013 at 11:39 PM

    Lovely lines! Beautifully written!!

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  2. Amrit SinhaFebruary 17, 2013 at 3:49 AM

    It's tough when dreams break ... but a new rainbow is always around the corner !!!

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  3. MixiFebruary 17, 2013 at 7:23 PM

    Disappointment portrayed in such strong, beautiful verse... wow!

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  4. DSFebruary 18, 2013 at 3:43 AM

    Beautifully written.
    Just a thought, instead of 'black and white' you could have written only black?

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    1. asteria's canvassFebruary 18, 2013 at 4:18 AM

      DS ,i get in to technicalities,and hence black n white..:)

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  5. संजय भास्‍कर August 4, 2013 at 2:22 AM

    beautiful

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