Monday, February 18, 2013

Green..







                                                               Jade Ring,
                                                       Benediction of lost love,
                                                              On her finger.


This haiku is shared with NaHaiWriMo and theme for today is Green
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23 comments:

  1. Ritesh AgarwalFebruary 18, 2013 at 11:49 AM

    haiku i think is the most difficult writing format...have never tried one...but it comes easy to you :)

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  2. asteria's canvassFebruary 18, 2013 at 11:59 AM

    naah im just 4 days old in this genre..neophyte..

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  3. Amrit SinhaFebruary 18, 2013 at 9:59 PM

    WOW
    O
    W

    Surely, this is one of the best haiku ever written by anyone !!!

    I am not exaggerating ... this is awesome !!!

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  4. asteria's canvassFebruary 18, 2013 at 10:47 PM

    thanks yar,bt u r exaggerating,we r seeing sum brilliant haikus on nahaiwrimo..

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  5. LauraMarch 25, 2013 at 5:31 AM

    passionate... a little jaded perhaps?

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  6. Anunoy SamantaMarch 25, 2013 at 6:06 AM

    I wish I had better understanding of this haiku thing coz I'm coming across a lot of them in different blogs and recently too many of them in your blog :-/

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    1. asteria's canvassMarch 26, 2013 at 1:44 AM

      im also trying to understand haiku n dats why attemping so many.. :)

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  7. AnonymousMarch 25, 2013 at 8:33 AM

    love this!

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  8. Kay L. DaviesMarch 25, 2013 at 12:08 PM

    I love the way you used "benediction"!
    K

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  9. Abin ChakrabortyMarch 25, 2013 at 12:09 PM

    why keep it?such mementos are best left forgotten.nicely done.

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  10. AnonymousMarch 25, 2013 at 2:40 PM

    So simple & sweet.

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  11. MixiMarch 26, 2013 at 1:11 AM

    I read this when you first wrote it, and didn't know what to say, and I find myself wordless again. Benediction of lost love - this just brought back bittersweet memories and even though the breakup was the best thing that happened to me, they are memories that are best left in the past.

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  12. UnknownMarch 26, 2013 at 8:41 AM

    I have a friend who continues to wear the ring that bound her to another for thirty years. It comforts.

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  13. MargaretMarch 26, 2013 at 10:16 AM

    Sometimes memories need to be put away... Jaded perhaps?

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    1. asteria's canvassMarch 26, 2013 at 10:27 AM

      may be margaret,but if it was that easy,world would be a different place.. :)

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  14. TCPCMarch 28, 2013 at 4:05 AM

    simply wonderful and beautiful...! so much said in brevity!

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