I rest
My trust in you
Pulled me from abysmal ditch
Soaked me in translucent divinity
elevated my dreams at your feet cocooned
I pledge my eternal being to you
Lord I pray to salvage
Mangled soul so
I rest.
This poem is shared with Theme Thursday and this
Is rictameter form where we write in 2-4-6-8-10-8-6-4-2 and
The first and last line is same,this I learnt on
real toads.
My trust in you
Pulled me from abysmal ditch
Soaked me in translucent divinity
elevated my dreams at your feet cocooned
I pledge my eternal being to you
Lord I pray to salvage
Mangled soul so
I rest.
This poem is shared with Theme Thursday and this
Is rictameter form where we write in 2-4-6-8-10-8-6-4-2 and
The first and last line is same,this I learnt on
real toads.
So beautiful, the gist of all trust in this whole universe:)
ReplyDeleteThe ultimate trust.
Deleteawesome...you did a great job with something that is to difficult for my to even try.
ReplyDeleteThank u so much for gracious comments.
DeleteWell done. I love this rictameter form. Hearfelt poem.
ReplyDeleteThe form is amazing in real sense.thank u so much for visiting.
DeleteThis is absolutely fantastic =) I am very impressed!
ReplyDeleteThank u so much , welcome to the blog.
DeleteLove the form, love the message, love the words.. - beautiful..
ReplyDeleteLove your pen name.. :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and heartfelt poem dear!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much valli.
Deleteawesome poetry... loved the format.. :)
ReplyDeleteIm learning this format.
Deleteserene praise marvelously penned down in the apt format !
ReplyDeleteLoved the poem and the form, excellent !!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much..
DeleteI agree with the others here, that is a beautiful poem and heartfelt too. Putting all of your trust in God is not an easy thing to do and most of us fight tooth and nail in our refusal to do so, but this poem makes our fighting seem so unimportant and that life would be so much better if we chose to give all of our trust to God.
ReplyDeleteThank for sharing this with Theme Thursday, it truly gives us something to think about. May you have a peaceful and blessed week.
God bless.
Thats one of the most generous comment i have ever received. I am looking forward to more of theme thursdays.
DeleteVery nice poem c: Technology News
ReplyDeleteSuch a deep and thoughtful prayer of thanks and promise. Well done to pour it into this form.
ReplyDeleteThanks aprille, i am learning.
DeleteSometimes you need to rest. Well done.
ReplyDeleteYes we all do. Thanks for visiting.
DeleteSums up everything...:)
ReplyDeleteAmen.
ReplyDelete:)
Deletebeautiful and uplifting :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much.
DeleteLoved it. Going to do some necessary resting myself now:)
ReplyDeleteWe all need it at some point..
DeleteTrue . Loved it!
ReplyDeleteNice words...
ReplyDeleteyou learnt the style from real toads and I did it from you... thanks :-)
we all learn from someone,im glad i could help.. Im also learning.
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